Comments on: Chapter 1 – The Lake

By: Perelandra

Perelandra — Sun, 22 Aug 2010 03:38:09 +0000

I am coming in years late to this, but I am loving it. It takes me back to growing up here in Brighton, so many memories…

By: paisley

paisley — Fri, 09 Nov 2007 01:32:33 +0000

you are being given an awesome opportunity to collect the things a life is made of.. do yourself and your father the honor of making fictional tribute to his life,, his italian heritage and even his death…. you can do it dan.. that is what writing is….

By: Chuck

Chuck — Tue, 06 Nov 2007 03:25:37 +0000

Hi Dan, I really enjoyed Chapter 1. So you’ve got another 14 of these eh? Impressive. When you’re ready to post more I’ll be ready to read. – Take care

By: Happy Hank

Happy Hank — Tue, 16 Oct 2007 04:17:32 +0000

MUSHHHH!!!!!

By: meleah rebeccah

meleah rebeccah — Tue, 16 Oct 2007 01:44:44 +0000

dood…… im impressed

By: Jodi

Jodi — Mon, 15 Oct 2007 12:52:53 +0000

(leaves and is on her way to Mass…looks at her watch, yep about an hour)
KICK YER BUTT! THAT IS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!
Dan….
I love it and await more…please

Now get on it before I hit the pike!
In all seriousness, this is wonderful. I kid you not.

Peace

By: terri

terri — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 22:49:24 +0000

I’m not ready to quit reading yet. More chapters, STAT!

By: sophie

sophie — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 11:52:46 +0000

Next chapter, please?

By: danleone

danleone — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 01:25:40 +0000

Paisley – The baby goats are my last chance at being a millionaire! Clearly, it is not the writing! But thank you for the encouragement. Your words always mean a lot to me.

Avery – Thank you! If by “working on it”, you mean going to my laptop every night, launching my book and then proceed to scour the internet looking for “inspiration”, then I have been working on it for a couple of years. If I told you the next chapter included an alien invasion by midget martians and a rogue Russian nuclear sub off the coast of Nantucket, would you still be interested? As you can see I am still having issues with the direction this book goes. When I am selling mimeographed and stabled copies of this book out of the back of a pickup truck, I promise to remember you.

By: Avery

Avery — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 00:49:50 +0000

I am wide awake and loving it!

How long have you been working on it? Where are you at with it? When can I purchase it at my local bookstore? And, most importantly, will you still remember me when you’ve hit the big time? ;o)